By ThatGuyLodos
The rain over the Fenmire Marches never fell. It seeped.
That was the first lesson Tern learned as a child, and the one he recited now, knuckles white around the splintered shaft of his half-pike. Rain elsewhere pattered, drummed, or lashed. Here, it oozed from a sky the color of a week-old bruise, clinging to cloak and skin like a second, colder membrane.
He was fifteen, which in the Marches meant he had survived fifteen turns of the black floods, fifteen harvests of sour-grass and bog-nuts. It also meant his blood had finally thickened, his father said, to the proper muddy consistency. Thick enough to stand the Night Watch.
“Eyes on the mire, boy,” Varle grunted from the next post over. The older man didn’t turn. He didn’t need to. His one good eye, the other a puckered pit of scar tissue, had long ago learned to smell movement before it came. “It’ll whisper to you if you let it. Make you see a face you know. A hand reaching up. Don’t look.”
Tern looked.
He always looked. That was the problem.
The mire stretched before them—a quilt of black water, trembling reeds, and the half-submerged skeletons of trees that had died a century ago but refused to fall. The bog exhaled. A low, wet sound, like something turning over in its sleep. Tern’s pike trembled.
“What’s down there?” he whispered.
Varle laughed, a dry rustle. “Everything we’ve lost. And some things we never had.”
That was not a proper answer. But in the Marches, proper answers were a luxury for drylanders. Here, you got riddles wrapped in mud and called it wisdom.
The trouble began not with a scream, but with a hush.
At first, Tern thought the rain had stopped. Then he realized the sound wasn’t absent—it was being absorbed. The bog’s usual chorus of croaks, drips, and the distant chime of marsh-lights had been swallowed whole.
Varle went rigid. His hand moved to the rusted bell at his belt, the one they were supposed to ring only for the Deep Tide. “Boy,” he said, voice flat. “Run to the stake-path. Don’t look back.”
“What is it?”
“MudBlood.”
The word hit Tern like a bucket of cold slurry. He had heard the old tales—how the first settlers of Fenmire had not been refugees, but fools who tried to drain the bog. How they had dug too deep, past peat and clay, past the old bones, into something that bled. Not red blood. Thicker. Darker. The kind that did not wash off.
And how the bog had answered.
A ripple spread across the black water. Not from wind—there was no wind. It moved against the current, slow and deliberate, like a serpent turning over in its sleep. Then a shape rose.
At first, it looked like a drowned man. Pale, swollen, trailing clots of weed and muck. But drowned men did not have fingers that kept growing, elongating into root-like tendrils that sank back into the water with wet, sucking sounds. Drowned men did not open their mouths to reveal not a throat, but a hollow, whistling darkness.
Varle rang the bell. Once. Twice. The iron clapper shattered on the third ring, eaten through by rust and something worse. “Go!” he roared, shoving Tern toward the stake-path—a treacherous line of sharpened poles driven into the bog, the only safe route back to the village.
Tern’s legs moved. One step. Two. The pole beneath his left boot groaned. He did not look back.
He heard Varle’s pike thud into something wet. Heard Varle curse—a long, rolling string of fen-words that turned into a gargle. Then a sound like a sack of offal hitting a stone floor.
He looked back.
Varle was gone. But his cloak floated on the black water, spreading outward in a perfect circle, as if something had pulled him straight down through the mud without disturbing the surface.
And then the MudBlood turned its head.
It had Varle’s face now. Not perfectly—the features were stretched, softened, like a mask of skin pulled over a different skull. But the scar over the eye was there. The crooked nose. It smiled with Tern’s father’s mouth.
“Thick blood,” it whispered. Not with Varle’s voice. With something older. A voice that spoke in the creak of bog-wood and the hiss of marsh-gas. “But still thin enough to run. Run, little fenling.”
Tern ran.
He did not stop when the stake-path ended and the village palisade began. He did not stop when his mother grabbed him by the shoulders, her calloused hands reeking of peat-smoke and sour ale. He did not stop until he was inside the longhouse, kneeling before the Hearth-Stone, where the old fire—the one they said had been lit from the first flame brought across the Dry Divide—flickered green and low.
“It wore him,” Tern finally choked out. “It wore Varle’s face.”
His mother went pale. The other watchmen exchanged glances—quick, furtive, the kind of glances that said they had known this day would come. The Elder, a woman so ancient her eyes had the milky film of a deep-water fish, leaned forward on her stool of woven bones.
“The MudBlood don’t wear faces, boy,” she said. “It remembers them. There’s a difference. And if it’s remembering now, after sixty turns of sleep…” She paused, looking at the green flame. “The patch is failing.”
“What patch?” Tern asked.
No one answered. Because no one in the village, save the Elder, knew the truth: that the Marches were not a cursed wasteland. They were a lid. And something beneath had been scratching for a very, very long time.
The Elder reached into her cloak and pulled out a small leather pouch. She tossed it to Tern. Inside, wrapped in a scrap of oilcloth, was a shard of black glass, warm to the touch, with a single word carved into its surface in a script no living fenlander could read:
UNSTABLE
“Version 0.68.8,” the Elder whispered, as the rain began to seep through the roof. “Let’s hope the next one loads before the bog does.”
Tern looked at the shard. Looked at the green flame. And for the first time, he wondered if the stories about the first settlers were wrong.
Maybe they hadn’t tried to drain the bog.
Maybe they had tried to build something on top of it. And the MudBlood was not a monster.
It was an error message.
End of Prologue
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MudBlood Prologue - v0.68.8
By ThatGuyLodos
[SCENE START]
EXT. SWAMP BORDER - DAWN
Rain falls in sheets. Not the gentle kind. The kind that soaks through leather, bone, and patience.
A mud-slick track cuts between blackthorn trees and sinking marsh grass. At the edge of the path, a WOODEN SIGN hangs crooked from a rotted post. Carved letters, half-worn by weather:
“CROOKTOOTH MIRE – TURN BACK”
Below it, in fresher scratch marks:
“THEY MEAN IT.”
A figure moves through the rain.
HOODED. Walking with a limp. A long canvas duster—stained brown and rust-red—clings to their frame. A satchel swings at their hip, clinking with glass vials and scavenged scrap.
This is SULLIVAN. No title. No past given. Just the mud and the road ahead.
SULLIVAN (V.O.)
You ever wake up with someone else’s blood under your nails and no memory of whose it was?
That’s not a question you ask if you want friends.
That’s a question you ask when you’re already out here.
Sullivan stops. Listens.
The swamp doesn’t hush. Frogs, insects, the drip-drip-drip from branches—it all keeps going. That’s how you know nothing’s hunting you. Predators bring silence.
Sullivan exhales. Keeps walking.
INT. MOSSY BUCKET TAVERN - NIGHT
A shack built from driftwood and desperation. Tarps for walls in some places. Lantern light bleeds through cracks. Inside, the air smells of boiled leather, burning fat, and bad decisions.
PATRONS huddle at split-log tables. Gaunt faces. Hollow eyes. No one talks loud.
Behind the bar, MAGS—a woman with one eye and a scar where her ear used to be—wipes a clay cup with a rag that’s definitely making it dirtier.
Sullivan pushes through the tarp-door. Water runs off their coat onto the dirt floor.
Mags looks up. Doesn’t smile.
MAGS
You lost or stupid?
SULLIVAN
Hungry.
Sullivan drops two dented COPPER BITS on the bar. Mags stares at them. Then at Sullivan.
MAGS
That buys a smell of the stew and a cup of the rain off the roof.
SULLIVAN
Then pour.
Mags grunts. Fills a cup from a barrel. Slides it over. The liquid is gray-brown. Sullivan drinks anyway.
From a dark corner, a man rises. CORVIN. Big. Broad-shouldered. Scarred knuckles. A rusted machete hangs at his belt, not quite in its sheath.
He walks over. Leans on the bar next to Sullivan.
CORVIN
Stranger. You got that look.
SULLIVAN
What look?
CORVIN
The one that says you’re running toward something just as hard as you’re running away.
Sullivan doesn’t answer.
Corvin smiles. Missing teeth.
CORVIN
I like it. Means you’re cheap to hire.
He slides a folded NOTE across the bar. Greasy paper. Scrawled handwriting.
Sullivan reads it. Expression doesn’t change.
SULLIVAN
Bounty?
CORVIN
Salvage. Man named Nester took something that wasn’t his. Something from the old wet ground.
SULLIVAN
Old wet ground?
CORVIN
Before the sinking. Before the blood came up with the tide. You know what I mean. MudBlood Prologue - v0
Sullivan sets the note down.
SULLIVAN
What did he take?
Corvin leans closer. Voice drops.
CORVIN
A key. But not for a door.
He taps the bar twice. Steps back.
CORVIN
Find Nester. Bring back what he stole. Twenty silver. No questions about what it is.
SULLIVAN
Where?
CORVIN
Last seen in the Drowned Stilts. East end. Ask for the woman with the bird.
Corvin turns. Walks back to his corner. Sits down. The shadows eat him.
Mags refills Sullivan’s cup unprompted.
MAGS
You take that job, you won’t come back.
SULLIVAN
Nobody comes back from anywhere.
Sullivan drains the cup. Stands. Pulls the hood tighter.
EXT. DROWNED STILTS - NIGHT
A settlement of raised shacks on rickety pilings. Water below. Dark water. The kind that moves when nothing’s touching it.
Sullivan walks the plank-walkways. Rain drums on tin roofs. A few lanterns burn low—oil is expensive.
At the end of the row, a shack with a CAGE hanging outside. Inside the cage: a small, mangy CROW. It watches Sullivan. Tilts its head.
CROW
(hoarse whisper)
Late. Late. Late.
Sullivan stops. Knocks.
A SLOT opens in the door. One eye looks out.
VOICE (OLD WOMAN)
The bird don’t talk. You heard nothing.
SULLIVAN
I’m looking for Nester.
Pause. The eye narrows.
VOICE (OLD WOMAN)
Nester’s dead.
SULLIVAN
Then I’m looking for what he took.
Longer pause. The slot closes.
The door creaks open.
Inside: a tiny room. Drying herbs hang from the ceiling. A single candle. An old woman—MOTHER DRAIN—sits in a rocking chair. Her hands are stained black to the wrist.
She points a gnarled finger at a FLOORBOARD that’s been pried up.
MOTHER DRAIN
He came back three nights ago. Wet. Shaking. Buried it under there. Then he left again.
SULLIVAN
Buried what?
MOTHER DRAIN
See for yourself.
Sullivan crosses to the loose board. Kneels. Reaches into the dark space below.
Fingers touch cold metal. Wrapped in oilcloth.
Sullivan pulls it out. Unwraps it.
A KEY. But wrong. Too long. Too thin. No teeth. Instead, the shaft is carved with symbols that seem to shift in the candlelight—just at the edge of vision.
SULLIVAN
What does it open?
MOTHER DRAIN
Everything you don’t want opened.
The crow outside screeches once. Then silence.
Sullivan looks at the key. At the black stains on Mother Drain’s hands. At the rain lashing the window.
SULLIVAN
Where did Nester go?
MOTHER DRAIN
Back to the place he found it. The MudBlood.
Sullivan stands. Pockets the key.
MOTHER DRAIN
You feel that cold in your chest? That’s not the rain, stranger. That’s the key remembering what it unlocks.
Sullivan heads for the door.
MOTHER DRAIN
Last thing. Nester wasn’t running from something. He was running to it. And he took the key with him. The trouble began not with a scream, but with a hush
So either he buried it for safekeeping. Or something brought him back here to bury it.
SULLIVAN
Which do you believe?
Mother Drain smiles. No teeth.
MOTHER DRAIN
I believe you’re already dead. You just haven’t stopped walking yet.
EXT. SWAMP - CONTINUOUS
Sullivan walks. The key in one pocket. A knife in the other.
The rain slows. Then stops. Mist rises from the warm mud.
In the distance—a LIGHT. Not a lantern. Pale green. Floating. Then gone.
SULLIVAN (V.O.)
Twenty silver. No questions.
But questions are all I’ve got left.
And the mud doesn’t answer. It only swallows.
Sullivan steps off the path. Into the deeper dark.
The mist closes behind.
[TO BE CONTINUED]
End of MudBlood Prologue - v0.68.8
MudBlood Prologue is a medieval fantasy management sandbox created by ThatGuyLodos where you lead a goblin tribe from a central cave base. This guide focuses on core mechanics and progression strategies for version v0.68.8 and similar builds. Getting Started: The Tribe Management
The game revolves around expanding your cave and growing your "army" through breeding and resource management.
Base Expansion: Collect resources like wood, iron, and stone to unlock new areas within the cave.
Raiding: Perform raids on neighboring roads, villages, and cities to acquire resources and new "recruits" for your tribe.
Inventory Tip: You can sell excess milk, wood, and iron from your inventory for gold. Breeding and Monster Evolution
A primary mechanic is the breeding system, which uses different races to create stronger offspring and hybrids.
Obtaining Minotaurs: To get a Minotaur, use a Succubus Extract potion on a female goblin; the resulting offspring will be a Minotaur.
Monster Stats: Use extracted milk to increase the stats of your new monsters, making them more effective for raids.
Depravity System: Increasing the depravity value of female characters unlocks new animations and facial expressions. Interface and Customization
Navigating the UI efficiently is key to managing a large tribe.
Station Customization: Each station (like the Brothel or Milking spots) can be customized. Use the arrows next to "Goblin Table" to switch client types to Werewolves or Abominations once they are unlocked.
Quick Navigation: Hover over the side bar on the right of the screen to quickly click room numbers.
Character Editing: Use specific potions to manually tweak skin tone, body type (breast, ass, arms, thighs), hair, and eye color. Version v0.68.x Known Features
Room Capacity: Recent updates added 15 additional slots for female characters near the brothel area.
Fast Access: A dedicated shop icon has been added to the main UI for quicker resource exchange.
Hybrids: Breeding different races together (e.g., humans, elves, and beast people) results in various hybrid types, though some rare races like Demons may require specific combinations or rare items.
For the most recent updates and developer logs, you can follow ThatGuyLodos on Patreon or check the community guides on the Steam Community Hub. MudBlood Prologue - Steam Community
MudBlood Prologue is an ambitious adult visual novel developed by ThatGuyLodos that blends dark fantasy, intricate storytelling, and high-stakes decision-making. Version 0.68.8 represents a significant milestone in the game's development, offering a polished experience that balances character growth with a world on the brink of chaos. Exploring the World of MudBlood Prologue
The game places you in a gritty universe where bloodlines, power, and survival are the primary currencies. As a "Mudblood," the protagonist must navigate a society that views him with disdain while uncovering secrets that could shift the balance of power. Key Gameplay Elements
Dynamic Choice System: Your decisions significantly impact character relationships and the game's ending.
Detailed Visuals: High-quality character renders and backgrounds enhance the immersive atmosphere.
Complex Characters: Each NPC has a distinct backstory and hidden motivations.
Mature Narrative: The story handles dark themes, political intrigue, and romantic subplots with depth. What’s New in v0.68.8?
ThatGuyLodos has focused on refining the user experience and expanding the narrative scope in this update. Version 0.68.8 serves as a bridge between the early setup and the escalating conflict of the main plot. Notable Updates
Expanded Story Arcs: New dialogue branches for main female leads.
Engine Optimization: Faster loading times and smoother transitions between scenes.
Visual Enhancements: Updated character sprites and lighting effects in key environments.
Bug Fixes: Resolution of save-game issues and dialogue typos from previous builds. Why Play MudBlood Prologue?
Unlike many games in the genre that focus solely on "content," MudBlood Prologue prioritizes world-building. The protagonist is not an all-powerful hero but a man struggling to find his place, making every small victory feel earned. The "v0.68.8" build provides several hours of gameplay, making it a substantial entry for fans of narrative-driven RPGs. If you're looking for more info, I can help if you tell me:
Yes, if: You appreciate slow-burn horror, textual depth over animation loops, and fantasy stories that explore degradation without glorifying it. If you are a fan of Fear & Hunger but wished for a more narrative-focused experience, this is for you.
No, if: You need instant gratification, dislike reading large amounts of text, or are triggered by body horror and psychological manipulation.
| Category | Score | |----------|-------| | Atmosphere & World‑building | 4.5 | | Gameplay Depth | 4 | | Technical Stability | 3.5 | | Replay Value | 4 | | Overall Fun Factor | 4 | | Final Score | 4 / 5 |